I have decided to improve my interactive space as I want to use it for my main work in the assessment presentation.
The link to it is: http://makingnewmaps.com/maps/Hollie_Ferguson/index.html
I would appreciate any feedback on it both positive & negative so I can make any changes to it :)
Thank You :)
I think this is really good, I like the idea and concept of it and you can tell by the characters and text/language used it is aimed at children.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the story behind it. Original, yet it works really well :D It may be a bit frustrating to the user when they are searching around the room and it isn't very obvious where they can look. (This is the same feedback simon gave to me about mine). Maybe you could do something to it to make it easier to navigate around? Also when you click on the "not here" piece of paper I found it a bit confusing how it took you straight to the place where the ipod was hidden?
ReplyDeleteOverall though, I think it's a really good piece of interactive work :D
I like how you have made your sequence into a child-like game, making it more interactive for a younger audience especially. Maybe the way youve made the text as a link some pages then you changed it to clicking on images is a bit inconsistant? Something to consider, but i think its all good! :)
ReplyDeleteI think this projeect is really effective in keeping the viewer engaged. The narrative is strong and your choice of images are interesting.
ReplyDeleteOliver Ross ( Non multimeda student) : i agree with Charlotte that it's a bit confusing on the clue bit but i think it is really good and people of george and lucas age would enjoy to use it.
ReplyDeletei think youve got a great choice of images, some peoples have like unecessary or weaker ones, but i feel like youve really thought about what youre doing and organized it well, which really shows, and keeps the "consumer" engaged. the colour and composition of the images also standout.
ReplyDeleteone of the best ones certainlyy :) good un holly.
only thing that i found was the change of font sizes and colours n things ? but i can see why its been done overall, well good haha xx